Judaism is a common religion. It is simaler to the Catholic faith and they have simaler celebrations to ours. They beileve in G_d simalerly to how we believe. To them Saterdays are sacred to them its called the Sabbath. They refur to Jesus as the messiah and have a holy bible and many other religious scriptures and prophecies. They beileve in one G_d and they have simaler worship.
Remember that members of this faith are still waiting on the Messiah.
Judaism is a common religion. It is simaler to the Catholic faith and they have simaler celebrations to ours. They beileve in G_d simalerly to how we believe. To them Saterdays are sacred to them its called the Sabbath. They beileve that the messiah has not come yet and have a holy bible and many other religious scriptures and prophecies. They beileve in one G_d and they have simaler worship.
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Judaism is a faithful religion. They are very true to what they believe in. People make so many stereotypes about jews, and how they are so wealthy. I believe that because of their indiference to worldly things,God blesses them in many ways. They sacrifice their saturdays; A day of fun to most of us, is their sacred day. Their Sabbat tradition is so important that some refuse to even press buttons. They follow the rules and comandments of their religion even though new trends change people, they remain strong. They are the faithful "chosen people".
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"They sacrifice their saturdays; A day of fun to most of us, is their sacred day."-Run-on?
Judaism is a unknown religion. Most people know the religion but does not know what the people believe in. People don't know that Jews symbol is the star of david. Everyone just think that Jews has big noses and sneaky. People does not know that when celebrating Shabbat, they cannt mow the lawn, hunt for food, liight a fire, plant a seed, and etc. The people are so hardcore about there religion.
*DO not know what the people believe in.
*People don't know that THE Jews symbol is the star of david.
*Everyone just THINKS that Jews HAVE big nose's and ARE sneaky.
*People DO not know that when celebrating the Shabbat, they CAN'T mow the law, hunt for food, LIGHT a fire, plant a seed, OR etc. JEWISH people are so hardcore about THEIR religion.
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Judaism should be a respected religion. Judaism was pretty much there since the begining. Many undermine Jews and they are hated by many countries but the fact of the matter is Judaism is -in a way-the begining of most religions. The begining of what most of us live today. In a way, most of our beliefs are tied to or are alike to Judaism beliefs. As a country, as a nation, as a world, we should respect the Judaism religion. Not saying we should all convert to Jews but we shouldn't judge them or patronize them. Judaism should just simply be a respected religion.
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From "As a country, etc."?
Judaism is a strict religion.
On saturdays there not allowed to work. Places that are majority jew even have elevators designed to stop on every floor so that they don't have to press buttons. On Yom Kippur which is supposed to be a holiday they starve themselves and repent. Even the way they prepare their food involves guide lines.
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Judaism is a mysterious religion. The reason why I say it is mysterious because of the 13 articles of faith. The 13 articles say that the Messiah hasn't came yet which most people believe it has. The Jewish people do not like to be called the chosen people because they feel equal to God. I feel that this is a very mysterious religion because of the way their beliefs are in text.
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hasn't come yet
The Jewish faith is a very spiritual religion. The Jewish religion has many traditions also many different symbols that add the spirituality to the people. The Jewish holidays are filled with family and spirituality and many of their holidays lasting up to nine days. The Jewish people are too very spiritual because they are often called “The chosen people.”
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The Jewish faith is a very spiritual religion. The Jewish religion has many traditions also many different symbols that add the spirituality to the people. The Jewish holidays are filled with family and spirituality and many celebrations lasting up to nine days. The Jewish people are too very spiritual because they are often called “The chosen people.”
Judaism is a relaxing religion. In the Jewish religion there are holidays where they can relax and rest, such as Yom Kippur. Where they refrain from all work and actions that cause others to work. On the Shabbat which is where on every seventh day they rest. Or the Jewish Christmas; Hanukkah, also known as the festival of lights, where they spend eight days receiving gifts along with eating and praying.
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Jewish people are somewhat very religious like Muslims and Christians.They keep fast on particular days like Muslims keep fast but for only a month out the whole year.They also worship one god.Judaism is a religion where people want to please their god just like any other religion.They think that Jesus is not the Messiah but Christians oppose that. In conclusion, Christians,Muslims and Jewish people have similarities but they also have different things.
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Comma after Muslim?
Judaism is a religion that's different they have there different belives every religion have there different believe.Judaism believed in one god, celebrated hannaka and they had jewish new year. it talks about the "keep kosher" the marriage.Judaism is a interesting religion to talk about.
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Judaism is a strict yet strong religion. They make sure that there holidays and beliefs are done correctly or things are said correctly and carried out the right way. They're a strong religion because they strongly believe in their faith and i feel they stick together also when it comes to their beliefs.
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Judaism is an intricate religion. With so many observances and traditions, to me, Judaism seems like it would be a difficult religion to observe. For example, Yom Kippur is a Jewish holiday in which Jews refrain from work, fast, and attend synagogue services. If pressing a button is considered work to them, then what other simple tasks can I not perform in accordance with Yom Kippur? With so many specifications on what you can and can't do, Judaism is a very detailed religion.
Correction: replace "Yom Kippur" with "Sabbath"
People tend to make many assumptions regarding the Jewish religion and the people who follow it. Many might think that just because you are Jewish that you are mean, and heartless. Jews believe that God will reward the good, and punish the wicked. Many orthodox Jews live off that principle and practice it daily. While their personalities get discriminated, the way they look is often exaggerated. Cartoons and other shows depict Jewish people with large hooked noses, thick full lips, and dark curly hair. Jewish people were once regarded as a race, but in reality Judaism is a religion. Regardless of your looks or the way you act. It’s your beliefs that matter.
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Judaism is a misunderstood religion. People tend to only see the appearance of Jews not who they really are. People stereotype Jews as having long noses and having a bump on their nose. People say Jews are greedy, and stingy, but have they actually met one. Jews are not different people just think they are, because of the way some people were taught in life.
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Judaism is a vigorous religion. It is strict they believe strongly about Judaism .The founder of Judaism was Abraham .Jews believe in the Messiah, believing that he didn’t come yet but that’s the difference between Christians and Jews. Christians believe that Christ has come already. People judge the Jews based on history. Many people have a lot of different views about Jews such as stinginess, big noses. They also have a Passover feast which originate from the Hebrew roots.
Judism is a mixed religion. Christians share the same beliefs as jews. Christians and jews believe in the messiah, even though jews believe he hasn't come yet and christians believe he has came and is coming back. Jews also have holidays similar to Hebrews, like the passover feast, where in egypt the hebrews painted lamb blood over their door so the spirit of death would passover them.
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